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Thursday, 11 February 2016

                                                               

Term 1 2016  Personal Recount Sample                                            Name: Hollie
Title:Chistmas
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One day mum,dad,kaitlyn and I went to nana’s and pops house for christmas I was excited to open my christmas present but I had to wait until everyone was awake every one was awake I was excited yepe!! I ripped my christmas present open it was fun. the next day I crunched my lunch it was yum! I loved it I wanted more but mum told me no because I had to much so I played handball
with my sister and my cousins I had fun because I bet  my sister.





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