My Easter Recount with Muscles, Guts and Skin.

Here is my Easter recount after I worked with the teacher to make sure it was good enough for publishing. I want you to notice that I used three similes and  some rhyming.

Making a recount skeleton.

KIa ora After we made our writing skeleton on the planning sheet, we had to highlight all the notes and then copy and paste them below in a list one after the other. So, our story skeleton looks like it can stand up now but it is still just bones. Our teacher says writers call this an outline. We read our outlines out loud to each other and they sound good.Here is mine below.

30 March 2016.

Easter.

Yipee, it’s chocolate eggs time!’’ I shouted.

At Easter weekend.

My family and I.

At home.

Had a Easter hunt.

In the morning, we started the hunt found all eggs.

They were as brown as dirt.

Later my sister and I had more eggs-Mum and Dad surprised us.

They were as brown as dirt.

I went to bed and to go to.

sleep.I felt sick.