This is my recount about what I did at school when the rest of my class went away on the ski trip.
I think I did pretty good but next time I am not going to use 'went' all the time.
Ka kite ano
On Monday, I woke up, got ready and went to school. Then the bell went and I went to line up. After we all got to the class I got my Chromebook and went back to do some writing.
Later I helped some little kids do ABC & writing.
Then we had fruit & milk. Later the bell went and we all went out to have something to eat.It was fun in Mrs Tatum's class with all the little kids.
By Hollie
Hi my name is Vanya and I go to Paihia School I think that your writing is very awesome I like your writing very much because you used paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Vanya and I go to Paihia School I think that your writing is very awesome I like your writing very much because you used paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteHi Hollie I am Rangimarie I go to Tautoro school nice use of the paragraphs also I like how you told us you will try to use went less next time. Next time though you could add more information was it fun doing the ABC with them. Keep up the amazing work. See you later.
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