Kia ora This week we have been learning how to make plans for a recount so that it has an organised structure.We had to fill in notes in the right places on this form. We didn't have to use whole sentences, just the important ideas. Then we had to read the notes back to each other and they sounded almost like a whole story.Our teacher said it was like we had made a skeleton for our story.Later we get to add the muscles,guts and skin and then we will be finished!

Hi, Hollie. I can tell you used your sense of sight to notice that the Easter eggs were brown and you used these ideas to write your simile. I also noticed that you used your sense of taste because you used the adjective 'delicious'.
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